Third idea

Planning and Development: Third idea

Amelia has taken our second idea and has simplified it, I think she was worried that the last idea was too complicated.

The narrative for her idea is... 

...First we see the protagonist getting ready for a race- putting on a race suit, walking to his car, and getting in it- whilst there is the non-diagetic voice over of his girlfriend talking about an argument they had; something like “I told him I had a bad feeling”, and that she feels that everything is her fault- On screen is past tense. We then see his eyes lose focus as the race starts, the screen goes black and the name of the film fades in.

This idea may be more simple to do than the last because it doesn't involve a flashback. However, I think that there will be some problems with this idea; there is not much to fill a 2 minute clip, so the idea would need developing. Also, by simplifying the narrative, I think that the target audience would find it less exciting. 

These two ideas are good, so we are going to pitch them to a group of our target audience so we know which is best.