Rough cut

Rough cut

This is our rough cut, we know there are various issues with it but we are hoping to rectify those issues in the following week. Issues such as this is only 52 seconds long; we can make some of the establishing shots longer which will not only mean we have a longer film but we feel as it will set the tone of the film better. We are also going to re film the scene where the protagonist walks up the stairs to make the footage more interesting with different angles and also so it is longer. We are also going to add in a scene where the protagonist puts on the race suit, this is to introduce the protagonist with close ups denoting that he is a character of importance because at the moment we only have medium shots and extreme long shots of the protagonist. Unfortunately we are going to have to take out the argument scene, this is because it did not work without diagetic sound and it is not overly important to the narrative.
We also need to work on the editing to make the transitions smoother especially on the establishing shots at the beginning.